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PostSubject: Uzumaki,Toshiko   Wed Jul 23, 2014 9:04 pm


Name: Toshiko Uzumaki
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Birthday: May 28th
Clan: Uzumaki
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Village: Konoha
Rank: (S) || Sannin
Element(s): Lightning, Fire,
Specialties: Ninjutsu, fuuinjutsu

Height: 5'9
Weight: 142 lbs
Hair: Toshiko's hair is a black color, and is short and spiky. It is quite similar to that of naruto's but just a different color.
Eyes: Toshiko's eyes are a fluorescent, shining green color with a strange yellow tick in his pupils.
Others: Toshiko has a long scar that starts at his bottom chin, and reaches down to his lower neck. He got the scar from his very own father.
General Appearance: Toshiko is always seen wearing his signature black jumpsuit underneath he has a orange shirt, and always carries a bag of kunai in a pocket on his left side. Also, he has his own katana that he carries in a sheathe that lays across his back and almost always takes it around with him. He is Caucasian, and has a dark tint to his skin. On his right wrist he always wears a locket that his mother gave to him, and keeps it hidden under the sleeve of his black jumpsuit. His appearance, and the locket symbolize his dedication to his dreams and friends, and the locket reminds him to never give up in dire situations.

Personality: Toshiko was always a strange person. He was nice, but wasn't always liked by his peers. While nice, he was also arrogant and stubborn at times. Never liking to be made fun of or showed up, and he aspired to become the greatest. Most of the time, he would tell the others that he would even become the hokage. Because of this, he was picked on most of the time when he was young simply for being a ambitious child. In his later years, he was still picked on, and is now considered a outcast. Toshiko found it hard being isolated from the others around him. The only people that spoke to him were those that were on his team and even then they didn't like him that much. Regardless of this, Toshiko wanted to have his comrades close, and eventually started to warm up on them. Now, he is slowly gaining back the social recognition that he always deserved, and doing it with the help of his team. While he is nice, he can show his bad side. After losing both his parents, Toshiko's only goal is to protect those that he holds dear to him. If anyone or anything threatens his friends or the bond that they share, Toshiko is prepared to show hostility and a world of pain to it. While he does care greatly for his friends, he still has self respect. Before the death of his mother, she told him that if he didn't believe in himself, then no one else would. He knew that to become the hokage, he couldn't doubt himself or it would never happen. His ninja way is to never go back on his word, and to help those in need at all costs.

Likes: Toshiko rather much enjoys eating various foods. His favorites being ramen, chicken, pudding, cake, rice, and cookies. He enjoys training almost more than anything else, and loves learning new techniques. His top 2 likes are protecting those in need, and giving up himself for his allies. Toshiko also likes visiting the grave of his mother since her death, and every time he goes to visit he leaves one rose. He likes the locket that she gave him that he keeps with him at all times, and savoring the memory of her in his head. He also enjoys spending time with his class teacher.

Dislikes: Toshiko dislikes cats (Specifically scrawny cats with no hair on them), vegetables, and while he can tolerate seeing it he hates seeing dead corpses. He also hates people who purposely pick on others, and evil people. Toshiko can't stand other individuals that do things with the intent of causing either physical or emotional harm to another being nor can he understand why someone would want to do that. Regardless, he knows that there are people like that in the world and while he may not be the strongest, fastest, most intelligent, extremely durable ninja, he will do everything in his power to put a stop to those that do so. He doesn't like it when people bring up his mother, and if someone says anything bad about her then he will either become extremely hostile towards them, or fight them on the spot simply because his mother was the greatest person he ever knew and didn't deserve to die the way that she did. Most of all, he hates it when other people harm those that he cares about. With his mother dead, he only has a few people left in the world that he can call his friends. If anything were to happen to them, then he would lose all control and would barely be a functioning part of society. He feels as though his number one purpose is to protect his friends, and if someone tries to stop him from doing so they are in for a world of pain.

Motivations: Toshiko only has a few motives for his actions. The first and foremost motive, being his goals in life. His dream is to become a hero among the ninja, and eventually become hokage. That is his reason to prosper. His second reason, is his mother. During her time alive, his mother taught him nothing but how to be kind, and how to cherish life. She was a godly person, and to Toshiko she was the greatest person on the planet. Her death not only traumatized him, it changed his perception of things. Eventually, he realized that he would have to honor his mother, by taking her teachings and her belief in him, and making it all worth something by achieving his own goals. His third, and final reason is his friends. His friends mean the world to him, and he feels as though he has to grow and get stronger with them to stay a honorable ninja.

Fears: Toshiko doesn't have many fears. He slightly fears water as he was never taught to swim, and also fears slugs. His one, worst and only major fear, is the fear of his father. Toshiko thought that his father was the greatest person that he'd met in his entire life. During his upbringing, he would do literally everything with his dad. They were the best of friends, and they loved each other. That was until the day that Toshiko came home from the ninja academy. He saw his mother bloodied on the ground, and being murdered by his father. This made him lose all respect for his father, and he started hating him. He also hated the fact that his father simply walked away after murdering his own wife, and still hadn't been caught. While Toshiko feared him, he knew that he would have to get revenge for his mother. It was going to be extremely hard, but he would get it done. That was the only way to conquer his fears.

History: "Toshiko? Wake up, it's time to go to the academy."[/color] Toshiko woke up in his bed to see his father shaking him. He sat up, and then started rubbing his eyes. He looked at his father, and smiled at him. "Hey Dad." "Hey Son. Come on you need to get to the academy. How are you gonna become hokage is you don't pass the academy first? Toshiko looked surprised for a bit, and then simply nodded knowing that his father was right. If he was ever going to become hokage, he'd need to be the best of the best. To do that he couldn't even miss a day of the academy. Toshiko then jumped out of bed, and got ready for school. Just as he was about to go out of the door, his mother came to greet him. "Hey Toshiko. Have a great day at the academy. Do your best. I love you." She said it as if that she was going away. Toshiko didn't understand as he was only 6 at the time, but he nodded. After that, he headed out the door and started walking towards the ninja academy. After a  while, he made it to the entrance and walked out to see that his class was already out in the back in the training grounds. The instructor looked off from his training, and looked towards Toshiko. "Toshiko! You're late!" "I'm sorry bout that Kokuro Sensei!" Toshiko ran over to the rest of the class. "What do you expect to do as a ninja if you can't even come to the academy on time?" "Well.... First i want to get to get to S Rank, and then i'm gonna become the hokage." Toshiko's words were meet with nothing but laughter from his class members. "Hey! I don't see what's soo funny! I'm gonna become hokage i swear it!" After a bit of laughter and jokes, everyone got quiet. Kokuro then spoke up. "Okay then Mr Hokage. Why don't you show us your skill. We are learning the supernatural walking technique. As a shinobi and a Uzumaki, this should be easy for you." Toshiko nodded, and got in the same path of the tree. He focused more and more chakra into his feet, and then ran for the tree. He jumped up, and connected his feet with the tree stump. He didn't fall over. Toshiko smiled as everyone else stood and looked at him in disbelief. "See? What i tell ya? Next Hokage right here!" As he spoke, he lost concentration in his chakra. His feet disconnected, and he fell to the ground face first. The rest of the class laughed at him, but Kokuro sensei shut them down. "That's enough that's enough." Kokuro then walked over to Toshiko and helped him up. Toshiko wiped the dirt off his face. He was ashamed. Why? Why did they laugh at him? He didn't do anything wrong. He just had a dream. Were people really gonna shut him down because of it? It didn't feel good to go through that. Toshiko held his head down and tried not to cry. "class dismissed for today. Everyone is free to go." Toshiko didn't say anything, and slowly started his way home. He felt like there was nothing there for him. Then he remembered. His mother. She'd be there to see him. toshiko went right back to his house. He'd go to his mom, and everything would be okay. Toshiko came up to the front of his house, and knocked on the door. "Mommy? Dad? I'm home." The knob of the door turned, and Toshiko smiled. Slowly, the door creaked open. Toshiko eyes widened in disbelief at the sight he was greeted with. His mother was on the ground with a axe  in her back. She looked up at her son, with a smile on her face. She was smiling. But why? She held out a hand to Toshiko, and placed it upon his cheek. "Go Toshiko. Leave from here. Run. Go fulfill your dreams. This is my end now. I love you more than i love life itself. Become hokage for me. Okay?" Toshiko didn't say anything in response, and simply stood there in shock. Toshiko then heard footsteps coming from the other side of the house. Getting closer, and closer until his very own father appeared in front of him. His father said nothing, took the axe of of his wife's back, and then pounded it into the back of her skull. She stopped moving, and then died right then and there. Toshiko was still in shock. Tears started rolling down his face and he was being filled with a great pain in his heart. He couldn't move. There was nothing that he could do. His father then ripped the axe out, took it up, and struck Toshiko with it across the cheek. Toshiko went back, colliding with the wall as a great pain was in his cheek. His father then dropped the axe, and spoke to him. [color=#ff3300]"There is your mark. That is your key. That is how you remember what has happened today. When you are ready, you come and fight me. Get revenge for your mom."

Toshiko was born on may 28th in the uzumaki clan. He was brought up as a only child, and lived with his mother and father. He had a well upbringing, and never really had any issues with anyone. He would mostly spend time with his beloved father. His father was always there for him, and always tried to make the best of Toshiko's life. He hugged him, played with him, cheered him up when he was sad, and always made him feel accomplished in life. He was the one that told Toshiko that he was going to become Hokage someday. Toshiko's mother and father never got into fights, and they seemed like the perfect family to him and everyone else in the clan. Toshiko was always messing up though. In the ninja academy, he seemed to always be behind. He never excelled in any classes, though he wasn't a bad mannered student. Despite his grades and his lack of jutsu skill, he always spoke of how he was going to become the hokage someday, simply because it was the wish his father had imposed on him. The other children laughed, telling him he would never even attempt to become one due to his skill. Regardless of that, Toshiko never said anything back to them in a rude manner, and just kept tellin himself that they were lying. Eventually, the other kids noticed that he was refusing to rebuttal, and they started to bully him. Toshiko had never done anything wrong. This went on for a bit, and eventually Toshiko was a complete outcast. No friends at lunch, no one would want to be near him on the playground. He would just sit and be isolated from the other students in a attempt to get a break from the abuse he received. A few years went on like this, and one day, his life would seemingly change forever. At the time, Toshiko was only 9 years old. He had learned a few small time jutsu, but nothing special. As he was coming home one day, he went back to his house, and opened the door to a grizzly sight. His mother was laying on the ground directly in front of the door frame. Her back was ripped open, with a ax inside, and her blood covered the floor. Toshiko stared off in absolute horror. With her last breath, his mother told him that she loved him, and then told him to run. As she spoke the words, Toshiko's father came to the scene. He ripped the ax out of her back, and then drilled it into the back of her skull. The impact from the attack and the sharpness of the blade cracked open the back of her skull, and caved it in sending her own brain matter and blood flying on Toshiko and his father. Toshiko wanted to run, but he was in absolute shock of what he had just witnessed. After doing so, his father looked at Toshiko, and then ran out of the house, and left the village. The people of the Uzumaki clan couldn't believe the news of Toshiko's mother's death, or that the husband had killed her. some even said that Toshiko had killed his mother himself. Regardless, after this Toshiko had no parents. He was forced to live on his own, and was now a lonely, isolated young boy. 5 years later, things started to look up for him as he was learning more jutsu, and making more friends. He had made it his goal to find his father, and to get revenge for the death of his mom.



Rp Sample: Toshiko was dedicated. after 6 years of being bullied, tortured, and abused by his classmates, and his own father, Toshiko decided that he was going to achieve his goals in life. He had told everyone that he was going to become the hokage, and as determined he was there was nothing that was going to stop him from doing so. With all of the bad things that had happened to him in life, he had to make room for the good. No matter how hard it seemed, Toshiko swore that he would get it done. He woke up in the morning, laying on a mattress in his empty home provided to him by his teacher. He looked around, and then sat up in bed. After a few moments, he realized, and remembered. It was the day. The day it happened. The day he lost his mother, and his whole life changed forever. He looked down, grimacing as the memories went flowing through his head. He went up to the door of his home as a child after a terrible day at school, and opened it to find his mother laying on the ground covered in her own blood with a deep gash in her back. She didn't ask for help, she didn't scream, nor did she cry. She simply told Toshiko to run, and that she loved him. After that, Toshiko's father appeared, but he didn't help. He simply came to deliver the final blow. After doing so, Toshiko thought that he was next on the list. Instead, his father simply walked away. Toshiko still didn't understand any of it, and the memory brought great pain to his head and chest. Why had his father done it? Neither of them showed any indication towards the fact that they were fighting not once in Toshiko's life. Even if they were fighting, why would he have to kill her? Why was his mother seemingly unaware or unwilling to fight for her life? The simple thought of the matter brought tears to Toshiko's eyes. "It doesn't matter. I have to go pay my respects to her right now." Toshiko then got from his bed, took a shower, brushed his teeth, and put on his daily ninja gear. After doing so, he grabbed a rose from his kitchen counter, and walked out of the house. There was still about thirty minutes before he would have to attend the ninja academy. Eventually, he came upon the graveyard. Walking around in the place simply gave him shivers as he hated to be around the dead. Toshiko walked up to his mothers grave, and then got down on both knees and placed the rose there. Toshiko looked at the ground, and gave a slight smile. "Mother........Thank you." After speaking, he slowly stood up to his feet and walked away heading for the Ninja academy.

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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki,Toshiko   Wed Jul 23, 2014 9:10 pm

Ooookay, biggest issue right off the bat: you're template and coding are broken. Badly. Please recopy it from the code box on the guideline and fix the issues.

Everything else checks out overall. Get us the artist name and the image name if you're going to use something off Deviant art please.
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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki,Toshiko   Tue Jul 29, 2014 10:01 am

Bump, i couldn't find the artist name
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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki,Toshiko   Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:21 pm

Images are broken. Why is this all centered? xD

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