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PostSubject: Sylvanas Kazesousha    Thu Jul 24, 2014 12:40 am




Basics!
Name: Sylvanas Kazesousha
Age: 13
Birthdate: June 12
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Rank: Jounin (S)

Village: Kirigakure
Clan: Kazesousha
Element(s): Water, Lightning (Red in Color)
Specialties: Ninjutsu, Medical Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Special Characteristics:
Name: Night Vision
Type: Eyesight
Description: This simply allows the holder of the eyes to have mild night vision. Ten feet away, perfect vision. Twenty feet, good vision, shadows are intensified lightly. Thirty feet, okay vision, clothing and skin color are blacked out. Fourty-five feet away, faltering vision, barely able to make out shadows from other shadows. Fifty feet, unable to see clearly, but can make out certain things.

Name: Varied Chakra Color
Type: Supplementary || Non-Combat
Description: Having no effect on the player's combat and damage ability, the manifested color of the player's chakra is different then normal. Non-elemental chakra will manifest as something other then the normal blue, while elemental chakras will be colored different then what is considered normal (Katon may be green instead of red/orange, Suiton could be yellow, etc.) User is free to decide what the color change is, however once stated the change cannot be undone, nor is the user able to change it again at a later time. Red Lightning.


Appearance!

Height:
4' 12"
Weight: 113 Lbs.
Hair Color: Light Salmon
Eye Color: White
General Description: Her raiment is now of a different sorts than simple village clothing as is the custom of Kirigakure. She wears her own clothing, in a unique assortment of style. Her skin is a milky caucasion tone, it seems although she has aged, her skin has not. Her lips are a dusty pink, intercepted by the slit of the bridge underneath her nose. The nose itself is actually relatively small in size, and curves up lightly, giving it an almost baby-like appearance. The frame of her face has a narrowly curved shape, being covered at the top by her hair. Sylvanas has mildly long hair, stretching to the back of her shoulders. It is an emassed bright white-pink hue. Some say it is almost ghost-like. Which is almost true, considering her eye color. For some strange reason, Sylvanas was born with an extremely light pupil color, and when light reflects from them, they glow much like a cat. Due to this, it has allowed Sylvanas to actually have mild night vision. Not to the extent that she can see perfectly, but about thirty-two feet away, she can still hit an enemy with an arrow using pinpoint precision. After that, it seems to fall off rapidly.

Sylvanas has a unique wardrobe considering her age and personality. She wears extraordinary lightmail plating made especially for Windrunner clan members, black and gray in color, as is the blackened headband for Kirigakuregakure. She wears slightly pointed shoulderguards which fan out from underneath each other, having two rows. The stitching on the leather and cloth outfit is impeccable, made from the finest tailors of the Windrunner Clan. The engravings of oldstyle victorian era accents do the darkness of the clans background justice. She wears elongated armguards, linking from underneath her gloves, made of the aforementioned plating. Her fingers are exposed through the tips of the handguards.

Her pants consist of a blackened guardsman-like outfit. The waist is equipped with a tool belt, holding various scrolls, her Combat Instruction Manual, which she is working on herself, and a few exploding tags. Continuing down, the same type of armor covers her thighs, a portion of her shin, and the top of her feet, though the bottom of the footpads are still woven to silence the footsteps of their wearer. Underneath these exquisitely crafted leggings, Sylvanas wears a dark leather stocking on each leg, which seems to further darken her appearance. This serves to help hide her appearance as a whole in the night, doing the Windrunner clan justice, as they specialize in Stealth and Smithing.


About You!
Personality: Sylvanas, has a primary mode of living which is focused internally, where she deals with things according to how she feels about them, or how they fit into her personal value system. Her secondary mode is external, where she takes things in primarily via her intuition. Sylvanas, more than other people, is often focused on trying to outdoe or match her comrades and teammates. Her primary goal is to find out her meaning in life. What is her purpose? How can she best serve humanity in her life. She is among the idealists and perfectionists, who drive herself hard in her quest for achieving the goals she has identified for herself.

Sylvanas is highly intuitive about people. She relies heavily on her intuitions to guide herself, and use their discoveries to constantly search for value in life. She is on a continuous mission to find the truth and meaning underlying things. Every encounter and every piece of knowledge gained gets sifted through Sylvanas’s value system, and is evaluated to see if it has any potential to help her define or refine her path in life. The goal at the end of the path is always the same - Sylvanas is driven to help people and make the world a better place, even if it means through death.

Generally thoughtful and considerate, Sylvanas is one of the good listeners and she can put people at ease. Although she may be reserved in expressing emotion, she does have a very deep well of caring and are genuinely interested in understanding people. This sincerity is sensed by others, making Sylvanas a valued friend and confidante. Sylvanas can be quite warm with people she knows well, though cold to those she has taken a disliking toward.

Sylvanas does not like conflict, and goes to great lengths to avoid it. If she must face it, she will always approach it from the perspective of her feelings. In conflict situations, she places little importance on who is right and who is wrong. she instead focus on the way that the conflict makes her feel, and indeed doesn’t really care whether or not she is right. This trait sometimes makes her appear irrational and but strategic in combative situations. On the other hand, Sylvanas makes a very good mediator, and is typically good at solving other people's conflicts, because she is intuitively understanding of people's perspectives and feelings, and genuinely want to help them.

Sylvanas is flexible and laid-back, until one of her values is violated. In the face of her value system being threatened, Sylvanas can become a highly aggressive defender, fighting passionately for her cause. When Sylvanas has adopted a project or job which she is interested in, it usually becomes a "cause" for her. Although she is a highly detail-oriented individual, she will cover every possible outcome with determination, vigor, and an extraordinary sense of strategy and trigonometry, prompting her to use angles and distances to her advantage to exploit the weaknesses of her rivals.

When it comes to the mundane details of life maintenance, Sylvanas is typically completely unaware of such things. She might go for long periods without noticing a stain on the carpet, but carefully and meticulously brush a speck of dust off of her combative instruction manual. Sylvanas does not like to deal with hard facts and logic. Her focus is on her feelings and the Human Condition makes it difficult for Sylvanas to deal with impersonal judgment. She would rather understand or believe in the validity of impersonal judgment, which makes her naturally rather ineffective at using it. AlthoughSylvanas has developed this ability and is able to be quite logical at times. Under stress, it's not uncommon for Sylvanas to mis-use hard logic in the heat of anger.

Sylvanas has very high standards and is a perfectionist. Consequently, she is usually hard on herself, and rarely gives herself enough credit. Sylvanas may have problems working on a project in a group, because her standards are likely to be higher than other members' of the group. In group situations, she may have a narcissistic aura to her that often prevents her from working effectively in the group itself, though exceeds when instructing or assisting the Academy Teacher. Sylvanas needs to work on balancing her high ideals with the requirements of everyday living. Without resolving this conflict, she will never be happy with herself, and she may become confused and paralyzed about what to do with her life.

Sylvanas is an unusually talented fighter. When it comes to combat,Sylvanas displays absolute skill in terms of strategy and angle comprehension. With a unique assortment of Jutsu, though weak in singularity, Sylvanas performs flawlessly using them in conjugation during combat with them while sparring or out on missions, a sign that she has a great level of chakra control and knowledge of the human body and its limits. Though sometimes ruthless, Sylvanas has shown that she is genuinely concerned with the wellbeing of her friends and family. Often, this will disable her from taking the life of an opponent or potential enemy, often striking to render unconscious or unable to fight otherwise, unless the mandate on a mission would have forced her to do so.

Likes: Sylvanas likes to write her book the most, expanding on it endlessly with chapters about how to effectively estimate angles and distances, predicting your opponents moves with next-level physics and common sense, and even developing countermeasures for any situation a combatant would face. She also indulges herself in training, almost endlessly in truth, constantly striving for perfection in the areas she sees most fit to help her survive out in the real world. However, Sylvanas also displays an incredible passion for the human psyche, emotions and psychological makeup of the brain. She constantly finds ways to discern enemy intentions, detect lies, and indulge the enemy in amusement by utilizing highly efficient mis-directive attacks and defensive maneuvers. (116/100)

Dislikes: Sylvanas has a passionate dislike for those who possess arrogance, and she never underestimates an opponent regardless of their blatant intentions. She can't stand to see vomit, as she tends to throw up herself when it is seen or even smelled for that matter. Another thing Sylvanas dislikes is, surprisingly, murder. She will take every possible countermeasure to avoid having to kill, always giving the opponent at least one chance to back away and leave before the imminent fight is at hand. Sylvanas takes no joy or pleasure in taking the life of another human being. She has a passive connection with nature that virtually 'prohibits' her from doing so without a logically explained reason. (115/100)

Motivations: Sylvanas` primary motivation is to finish writing her book. So far, she has successfully filled out almost twenty pages of the steno, writing more and more every day. Her future goal is to be a Strategic Coordinator for the Kirigakure Academy some day, helping other ninja become as tactically-inherent as she is. Aside from that, she has a passionate dislike for those who abandon the village who brought them to their present or past glories. As a standing emotional context, Sylvanas has a deeper side to her than most would imagine, as she often dreams about becoming a Hunter-Ninja or Black Operative. (102/100)

Fears: Sylvanas has a surprisingly rapid fear of her anger issues. She feels as though losing her temper can result in things happening which she has no control over, and this prompts her to take several meditating courses a day in order to try and overcome the urges to let loose. Because at the point in her life she is at now, she has no other outlet other than to write in her book. To preoccupy the instigation of her temper, she does this often to avoid causing an outburst. Often enough, she may even hunt down Reynado, her mentor and Sensei, just to train and get her mind off of things. (111/100)

History: .. A Runner on the Wind: Sylvanas was born in the small villa underneath the mountains of Kirigakure, surrounded by her mother and father, and two older sisters, Vareesa & Alleria. Vareesa had chosen against joining the military force of the Kazesousha, whereas Alleria had, at this point, been a veteran fighter in its ranks. Vareesa had chosen to be a Tailor and a Blacksmith, crafting multitudes of armor sets, swords, axes, bows and arrows. After hearing about the news of having a new sister, Vareesa had crafted a set of armor, and a special bow named Hurutsusagasu, or Heartseeker. Using special essences and fluctuation, she crafted the weapon to be capable of utilizing whatever element the wielder has, transferring their chakra into weapons of destruction. For example, if a wielder had the element of Fire, they would be capable of forging an arrow made of fire, or a highspeed jutsu using the very same aspect. Although seemingly pointless, it is actually highly effective during combat. Because the arrows are made of an elemental nature, they have a great resistance to physical damage, and do serious damage upon impact with a target. Vareesa hid the armor and weapon until her little sister was old enough to start using them effectively.

.. The Start of the Story: At this point in time, it has been twelve and a half years since the birth of Sylvanas, and she was prompted with the option to join the Military, or begin working as a professionist. Vareesa had been waiting quite a long time to hear her sisters` decision, as it had only been about two weeks since she finished the bow she had begun forging six years ago. Sylvanas had ultimately, after much consideration, chosen to join the Military. Needless to say, Vareesa was pleased, and yet fearful of her sisters decision. The reason behind this is, on a mission soon after Sylvanas was born, Alleria had been sent to reinforce comrades in the onslaught against an unknown oppressor. However, they had not anticipated the capability of the ninja who arrived at the battlefront. A young ninja, Viticus Hoshigaki and a Specialist in Wood Jutsu had almost destroyed the city by the time Alleria had gotten there. Doing what she could, she was forced to try and flee, but was caught in a massive flood that only served to completely shake the entire battlefield from its foundation, resulting in her death. Sylvanas had been made aware of this around the time she was six. Sylvanas took up arms in the above-ground Military Academy of Kirigakure, and began training.

.. Striving for Perfection: Now, approximately one year later, Sylvanas trains hard in the academy for success. Her studies are faltering, but her combat continues to improve greatly. She dislikes having to do homework, and prefers to train. About a month into the first semester, Sylvanas had begun writing a book, authoring it by calling it the "Combat Instruction Manual". Inside, it contains vivid information about how to fight strategically and tactically. It was actually a project she was given by her mentoring Head of Development, Raynado River, a powerful Jounin. After its grading, however,Sylvanas liked the idea of writing a book based on her experiences in combat, and began jotting things down on a normal basis, expanding on the foundation of the booklet as a whole. Sylvanas displays excellent chakra control and an increased perceptive ability that allows her to instinctively discern and overcome an opponents primary and secondary offensive measures, countering them accordingly. Though at a low rank such as Genin, she has been noted to perform well on missions, and is actually a favored student of Reynado.

.. Halfway through Hell: Since we last left Sylvanas, she has been promoted within the Academy after the Chunin Exams of Kirigakure. Sylvanas was now one of Raynado's prime students, and has displayed unbelievable prowess on the battlefield. She had actually earned an Honor Medal from the Academy during a large-scale fight with an invading bandit sect. Sylvanasmanaged to fight off an entire raiding platoon and get her seven squad mates to safety after they had been ambushed earlier that day, fighting it out throughout the afternoon. She managed to bring them from eighteen miles away back to basecamp alive and in one piece. This is an especially rare achievement, most ninja could only dream of receiving this gloriful triumph. And only a handful of her predecessors have ever achieved it themselves. Raynado was very proud of her, and was actually able to give her the Medal himself after a favor asked by Sylvanas to the Ranger-General. She gladly obliged.

Sylvanas still continues to train, strive and work hard to please her mentor and Sensei. Beating her body brutally by the end of the day, but never enough to keep her down. She would rest, meditate, eat, and get back to training as soon as she can. She displays an increasingly high intelligence quota, as she studies techniques and what information is known about them, in order to learn how to devise a counterattack for each one. Doing this on a daily basis, she normally spends two hours a day studying wartime history, angles, arithmetic, trigonometry, strategy and tactical studies, all the while recording the information into the notebook previously mentioned.  There came a time when she became ultimately concerned with evasion, stealth and medical ninjutsu. She coveted her lifestyle in it, in order to further better herself. She would have rivals and fellow teammates follow her into the woods, tell them to stand guard in an unknown location, and she would try to get across the field unseen, unheard and unnoticed, trying to reduce the amount of potential casualties during each time, until she wouldn't need lethal force to take out an opponent. Using medical ninjutsu, she has learned of the pressure points, chakra lines and physical limits of the human body. She can incapacitate, or even mentally trick the opponent, sneak past, and be about her way.

A special trait Sylvanas has, one rarely ever mentioned by Raynado, as he has said himself that her fighting style is unique and powerful in its own way. She fights using nothing but extreme stealth maneuvers, and exercises an increased understanding of the human psyche, as well as the Water she surrounds herself with to knock enemies out before more harm is done, or kill them if necessary. Raynado has mentioned on many occasions thatSylvanas is extremely skilled in assassination and ranged killing techniques. To this point, Sylvanas has not been beaten in combat one time since her admission into the Academy.

.. A Young Prodigy Rises: It was a rather cold and windy afternoon at Sylvanas's personal training dojo. Half of the residence normally seen outside were either off having fun at the festival while the others were away in deeper parts of the surrounding forest training to perfect new skills. Sylvanas took it up herself to not take any more missions of important until she could perfect this single ability and fighting tactic. Finding one location in which she was told by a fellow trainee, was labeled as the veteran ninja's sanctum. "So.. I suppose this is the place I will begin training my new technique. A fitting environment, truly." She'd note, continuing in to the temple. Taking in the landscape terrain and atomosphere, Sylvanas notices the many areas within in which she could potentially utilize as dummy set up areas to attack should she grasp the needed effort to strike down the useful training tools. ".. How would I start.. Even I haven't a clue how to get this sort of training underway." Sylvanas unsure herself, she'd really begin figuring she would start with a few basic kenjutsu stances and break away from them. Reaching over, Sylvanas grabbed a hold of her multitudes of weapons from the armory rack beside her. Simple and basic katana and curved swords. Bringing her rarer weapons would be too dangerous to risk, she figured. Nothing spectacular as of late, having the basic color of a black handle with a white inner lining wrap intertwined within it. The edge of the blades had a saw like pattern to them, which made for cutting with the variety of weapons much more damaging should they come into contact with the dummy's or another persons flesh. This was certainly dangerous however, as training such a stance could very well result in her injury - or even her death.

Sylvanas took hold of the swords placing them in all oddities of areas of her body, trying to pinpoint exactly which weapon of what size should go where. Her weapons were much different than the ones she now holds within her grasp. Many of them falling out of place at the slightest gesture of movement. This slightly infuriated the Kage, though she hadn't stopped trying to interlock them into the positions of her joints. She would then hold a firm but relaxed grip over each weapon, allowing them to shift weight with her body if she needed to. Spinning and holding the weapons tightly bound between her body parts, she'd assume a stance known as the Waki-Gamae - in which Sylvanas conceals most of them using excessive layers of clothing - though such traits lacked at the current point in time. The weapons appeared to be residing in such a manner where they could look like they were about to be fired off from their position and strike someone with ease. Having the need to use the waki-gamae stance as a way to understand how she could possibly distinguish a more fluid motion since she'll need to try and test out multiples of different methods to prove successful and achieve a more steady flow consisting of various amounts of power, speed and effortless positioning to rapidly switch weapons while in combat, or in close ranged combat with another swordsman. Taking a deep breath in, Sylvanas allows her lungs to be filled with enough of the new oxygen so that she can calm her nerves and muscles just enough to get into the mindset of being as empty as a crystal ball, and steady as the wind coming in through the windows around the training site. Steadily releasing the air flow she formerly built up from within, Sylvanas shifts her bodies initial stance, which looks like nothing more than her dragging her swords to begin with; towards a new position in a different stance, in which raw powerful strikes exert outwards in front of her. The muscles now tightened triggered her motion to relax and then release like a bullet fired from the chamber of a high calibre weapon. This would make nice for an equivilant warm up for Sylvanas now to trust that her body is capable of mastering the fighting style. She would twist, pulling forth the sword from her abdomen location out towards the front with a quick-draw strike.

Stopping just short upon hitting the dummy and reaching the imaginary line in which Sylvanas had drawn up for herself, the edge of the blade she drew forth was merely a single inch from the dummy's chest and stomach area - threatening to rend and tear the organs from inside her opponent apart. Eyes focused as she made a less attentive motion, delivering a fluid strike and more on the fact of her muscles getting tense. All in all, everything fell into place and Sylvanas proved herself capable of mastering this technique with more ease than she had previously anticipated before reaching this antipode of a training facility. However, almost falling over from the weight of the blades made her switch her flow of thinking, quickly standing back up on one foot and reaching down to place the swords back where their location was previously stated in the aforementioned areas. She had to position her free foot being a bit off channeled; less of an effective powerful striking position so that it allowed her other weapons to deal damage effectively and equally. She paid more attention to her breathing than anything, as that would be the primary key to unlocking the potential hidden within this fighting style which she claimed is practically undefeatable - even against the likes of a skilled sharingan user or a master Sylvanasurai. Soon after another strike was delivered to the dummy next to the one she previously attacked, the winds in the immediate vicinity started to pick up, the large entrance to the temple bringing forth the brushing vacuums to induce a more dusty environment, swelling up and pushing her slightly off balance due to the force of the wind. This sort of new obstacle actually interested Sylvanas - yet another thing that she would strive to overcome and remain triumphant in her attempts at success and perfecting herself. These were however much stronger and enlightening than average winds which pass by the world on a regular setting - something Sylvanas figured would most likely bring a thunderstorm about. Having no need to rest as of yet, Sylvanas once again resumes the waki gamae stance as before, and takes another deep breath in - gradually releasing it as with each new step formed, every new attempt became another new situation for her to overcome with the new surroundings of the training temple. It was long until the hours had passed and turned the surrounding world into nightfall - shrouding the temple in a facade of shadows and darkness. Needless to say, the Sylvanase routine was practiced until she felt it was necessary to stop and begin the sequence of implenting a new stance.

Day two of the hardened training, still no rest being taken throughout the night - the sky was still black as the moon, setting the horizon in preparation for sunrise in place of this world of darkness. The temple became much darker as trees whistled with the wind and the grass around it swayed in the direction of where the wind blew as Sylvanas continued slashing away at the dummies she had set up before practicing. Wearing a sleeveless black shirt, some loose fitting shinobi pants and a Kirigakure flak jacket, she made sure every possible factor would be implemented into the equation if she were to take this fighting stance to the next level - that level being the battlefield she knew all too well. Simple, yet excrutiatingly painful - and it sounds hard, though it is really not. Depending on the working ethic she placed for herself as a low standard determined how quickly such a skill would be mastered. As the Mentor of Sylvanas, Reynado, had previously told her in past training sessions, "Quiet your mind; yet, calm the storm. Drown out all disturbance and place your body in an eternal resting. When your mind is rested, you may open your eyes to see a more in-depth sighting of the world around you." She remembered every word down to the way he stated them. Every sentence, every phrase. Something she would never let leave her memory. He was a true mentor when it came to Sylvanas's training, simply removing one's body from all else and staying in one place momentarily, relaxing the mind and staying true to what your own movements interpret as fluid motion. Back when she first learning about what Kenjutsu was, the sensei explained that kenjutsu was the art of pertaining to techniques that entail the use of swords, whether the users be shinobi or Kareisurai. Kenjutsu can be used in combination with taijutsu, ninjutsu, chakra flow and unique fighting styles. Such as the one Sylvanas was now striving desperately to employ.

Sometime had passed, since the ninja had fought sleep and lost; and now a distinct noise was quaking through her brain. The noise began to break through the barrier that was the fine world of sleep, it was now more distinct; the noise was a voice, a voice spewing out words that were directed towards him, apparently she was supposed to have been awake the whole. It was a pity, that she had missed the childish rant of the young sounding voice.

Tilting her head, the ninja, opened his eye’s revealing golden slits of consideration that study the child carefully. She seemed to the age of an average student; cocking her head even further at the man, he sighed as her teal hair dropped upon her face. “So what do we have here, or better yet, what do you want with me?” her voice was lazy with a slight wisp of ice, and it seemed he was not in the mood to play baby sitter, especially when it came to another countries youth shinobi. He waved his hand toward Sylvanas, beckoning that she come forth in the form of an attack. Doing so, she performed a double lariat and triple kick aimed at the right leg, left side and neck area, following up with her father’s prized heirloom blade toward his right arm as a counter maneuver. However, he quickly disregarded her blatant loss of awareness by thrusting what seemed to be a ball of lightning toward her face. Quickly reacting, she brought the sword upward, Sylvanas quickly blocking the attack and jumping back, swinging the ball away from his hand and her own body.

Sluggishly the few taijutsu hits met their mark; it was honestly not that of a fighting blow, but on the opposing opinion the ninja had not forced self restraint upon himself, and apparently at this point that was accompanied with high level consequences. If the young girl hadn’t reacted on instinct and raised her weapon for defense, the ending could have resulted in something that would truly put the man in danger in the area, but fortunately the damage at this point was nothing more than a simple state of shock; she would get over it eventually he hoped. He was sure that Sylvanas had undergone harsher treatment than this, which was held a lot more truth than false tongue.

Looking down towards the child, the ninja, before her tilted his head, analyzing the child; it was a pity such an eager and interesting child was prepared to end his career for the sake of a glimpse at the power he desired. Though in the long run, it was something the stone shinobi could work with, a turning point from student to teacher - if you will. Of course the only true way to know if the child was what he could train towards the next generation, meaning he would have to test it.

“You use that blade a lot don’t you?” The man sighed as he motioned towards the flashy slab of metal, “There are merits to reliance on the body, and well”-the ninja shift his position in a manner that was either uncomfortable or sarcastic, as this motion happened again his brown layer hair shifter into the path of his golden eyes-“dodging, movement and following the flow, similar to using chakra.” Moving closer to Sylvanas, his gaze shifted and his tone deepened.

“You act as if you want to get powerful, but yet you jump in head long; at this rate you’ll be dead within the next few blows.” The stone ninja was in the mood to play games, but allowing this child to die was not one of them. “If your so interested in the art of lightning and acts as a ninja yourself, then you’ll have to improve on the basics.” At this point the man solemn face lightened up into something close to that of grin. “If that is what you truly desire, then I may be able to get you to that point, of course this will be just be the very beginning.” Now right in front of the child, the golden eyed man held out his hand as if to help him up; a window of opportunity was beginning to open. One which Sylvanas would waste no time taking advantage of. This man had been none other than Reynado, her current advisor and recruiting officer. Though this information had not yet been given to Sylvanas, she had her doubts and her speculations. Ones, which unfortunately, were not easily dismissed due to her peaked curiosity and child like antics. It was this very training session where Sylvanas was promoted to the official rank of Jounin.


RP Sample: Sylvanas would have been alerted by the oncoming shinobi, unsure of what to expect due to the remote location which she had set for herself at the beginning of the day to train in solace. Regardless, her sensei had gone for the evening and the sun had departed the very same. As he got closer, she blinked quicker only to refresh the rate of which she could see him. Scanning his body for possible signs of hostility, she picked up on nothing that was alarming, and actually had been able to notice a headband with the same village insignia as her own. Kirigakure. She smiled, knowing he was an ally. Standing, her breasts dropped due to being unpropped by the book she had been reading before, tucking it into her back waist satchel.

He was obviously much more skilled than Sylvanas was, at this point, he actually seemed genuinely important to the village. She had an ominous feeling, unsure of what to expect. Had he come to talk to her? Gather information? Perhaps a mission propaganda. Either way, he was here now, and there was no real way to figure out his intention without speaking to him. With the slight flip of her hair, she'd smile. "Actually, I am out here to train and record my studies within a book I'm writing about tactical configuration, strategic outcomes, countermeasures, angling and trigonometry.." She'd stop, taking a breath and then responding accordingly. ".. And what of you? Have you nothing better to do than to tread among the barrens of Kirigakure?" Sylvanas peered at him in curiosity. The around them was in such a perfect setting it couldn't have been a better day in the country. The snowfall, though beautiful, was light in weight and fell slowly.

If he were to be overlooking her from a spectators standpoint, he would see that she had marks of combat all over her, from bloody knuckles to dirty knees and scrapes. Her hair was also in a folly manner, though it was still well kept due to Sylvanas` compulsive nature of perfection and value. She'd walk toward him slowly, making her way through the light layer of snow now present on the ground. She held her hand out in a handshaking gesture and smiled at the man. Sylvanas Kazesousha.. I'm the Academy's newest Chunin. A pleasure." Her words were kind, but shrew, and anyone could have told that this was no ordinary thirteen year old just by the way she spoke, let alone the way she behaves on a daily basis. Regardless, she had started the conversation with her responsive action. Awaiting a response, she maintained the same smile she gave him when he arrived.


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PostSubject: Re: Sylvanas Kazesousha    Thu Jul 24, 2014 7:36 am

... I love this. Just a few small tweaks and we're good for that Jounin slot. :3 Forgive me if this is slightly unintelligible; I just woke up and I'm not fully conscious yet. xD

Is your clan just a surname, or does it have any kind of established history/abilities? If your clan is just a surname, and has nothing to it, you don't have to; as we allow for clanless ninja that just have a surname and no actual clan thing if they don't want to go that route.

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Higher Intelligence Ratio (172 IQ). Highly observant and analytical. Can use Ninjutsu with one hand. Specializes in Psychology and the human mind.

Because we're not going with special characteristics like boosted intelligence or something that have a quantifiable effect, just saying you have a high IQ doesn't really mean much. You just get to have fun showing that off via RP. As for the ninjutsu with one hand part; we don't require hand signs to even be mentioned in posts unless you want to; so that's not really anything either here. The Psychology bit would be something to talk about in your personality or likes, not really in your SCs.

Likes: 73/100
Dislikes: 82/100
Motivations: 52/100
Fears: 89/100
History: 3381/??? (Genin Base 400 + 200 for each rank above Genin gives us 1000 for Jounin (A) and 1200 for Jounin (S))

You're short on some word counts. Not badly, but we need a minimum of 100 for each section, with the history being well over anything you need to qualify for Jounin. Which rank of Jounin are you aiming for; A or S-rank?

History itself is fine. No issues there that I can see. Soon as the rest is adjusted you'll be approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Sylvanas Kazesousha    Thu Jul 24, 2014 2:24 pm

{R} - Fixed & Updated as per Requested.

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PostSubject: Re: Sylvanas Kazesousha    Thu Jul 24, 2014 5:24 pm


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