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PostSubject: Nara Rentaro    Sun Aug 10, 2014 10:25 am




Basics!
Name: Nara Rentaro
Age: 21
Birthdate: 1st of January
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Rank: D-Rank Missing-nin

Village: Defected || Ex-Konohagakure
Clan: Nara
Element(s): Raiton (S)  Shadow (S) (Clan) Suiton (C)
Specialties: Ninjutsu (S) Fuuinjutsu (S)
Special Characteristics:

Name: Untrained Sensor
Type: Combat
Requirements: None
Ability Tier: 1
Minimum Rank: D
Description: Either via the user's clan, or just a personal ability; they are able to sense the presence and chakra of other creatures with far more ability then a normal person would. At this level, the ability is highly untrained and very weak; allowing only minimal ability to sense. Basically useless at this level.


Appearance!

Height:
5.9
Weight: 180 pounds
Hair Color: Blond hair, the hair goes over the forehead in the middle of the face, the hair length is till about his neck.
Eye Color: Rentaro has brown eyes which get a little lighter deeper in the eye.
General Description: Nara Rentaro is a man who can be described as ''Insane'' He hates people in general. He likes to see blood. You could say that it's an addiction. Rentaro hates people coming close to him. He'd like to kill someone who comes into about 3/4 feet of him. Rentaro's general appearance is his easygoing blond hair. His black jacket, because black is the most awesome of colors according to Rentaro. And sometimes even a scarf. Scarves are what makes a guy a guy, according to Rentaro at least.

Rentaro's mentality is quite simple. Who can satisfy my hunger? Rentaro is hungry for blood. He wants death and maybe some fruit. But mostly death. Rentaro has no tattoo's or piercings. He doesn't like that stuff. According to him, evil isn't how you look. It's how you act. Rentaro on first sight wouldn't really look as an evil sadist scumbag. He would seem like an easygoing airhead. But once someone wants to talk to him or just generally wants to fight him. His bloodthirst shows. He will get cold eyes and wants to taste that person's blood or make him yell. He likes to be a sadist. He enjoys others pain. He likes the taste of blood. But he's not really a vampire. Some notes about Rentaro, he is really bad about being social, he's a socially akward guy. He just wants to murder. He's simple like that.



About You!
Personality: Rentaro's personality is pretty complicated. He's got a few screws loose in his head. His favorite thing to think about? It's death. Blood. And other gore. He loves the smell, feel and taste of blood. To him it's like water. His personality has become so twisted over the years, that not even satan would want him in hell. Some more things to note about Rentaro's personality is that he likes to be a sadist. He likes to make people suffer. It amuses him greatly. He likes to make people cry, scream, or just bleed. Rentaro's personality also includes social akwardness. He can't stand people and their emotions. It pisses him off beyond belief. He'll kill anyone that even tries to beg for his life.

To Rentaro it's either fight like a man and earn your survival or just die. Rentaro may be very twisted but he still at least wants to fight. Don't even try to ask for forgiveness. He'll kill you without mercy and without regret. Rentaro's has a big hero. It's the grim reaper ofcourse. Who else can be more awesome than death itself. Rentaro is so messed up that he thinks that if he will kill enough people. The Grim Reaper himself will come and congratulate him on his job.

Likes: Rentaro likes a few things but it's the exact opposite of what normal people would like. He likes blood, no scratch that. He loves blood. The taste, look and feel of blood. It makes him tingle inside. He loves pain as well. Inflicting pain on others that is. He loves to make people suffer slowly and painfully. But a quick and surprise kill can be a lot of fun aswell. He also likes to kill, if that wasn't obvious enough. This man is twisted beyond belief. He loves death, killing, destroying pretty much all bad in life is this guy. Rentaro also likes making people do his bidding. He loves using his clan abilities to make people do whatever he wants. The most fun way of killing people is when they can't even do something about it.

Dislikes: People. Rentaro hates people. He can't stand mass crowds. He just wants to grab a chainsaw and run through them all. He's a socially akward guy on a whole new level. He can't stand people and crowds. He just despises it. Other things that Rentaro hates is to make friends. Friends are useless, they only betray you in the end. It's just stupid to have. Rentaro also hates people who beg for mercy. He'll just kill them MERCILESSLY. It's really just dumb to beg for your life. Your life doesn't mean anything to Rentaro whatsoever, so why beg for it? Rentaro also hates people who surrender. Fight to the death of just die regardless. Rentaro is a scumbag, he doesn't care he's a scumbag he'll just kill.

Motivations: Rentaro has some twisted motivations. His biggest motivation is to kill as many people as he can. To wipe out as many human scum as he can. He hopes that one day, death himself will come to great him. His dream is to meet Death, The Grim Reaper. Some other motivations Rentaro has is to kill all life. YES kill all life! He wants to make everything die and feel pain. He loves the expressions on dying people. He wants to see all of those expressions. Rentaro has some small motivations like mastering his Nara clan technique. But it's mainly to kill someone again. His entire being is just surrounded by death and despair.

Fears: Rentaro doesn't fear that much. He fears a few small things however. He fears stupid people. He hates people that are retarded so much that he just started fearing stupidity. Rentaro also fears people that are more evil than him. How could someone possibly be more evil than him he always thinks. It fears him. Could there really be more evil people than Rentaro out there. The thought alone fears him. Rentaro fears small things in life. Happy families, friends, anything with freakin' love in it. It fears him. He hates love and all the crap surrounding it. Can someone go grab a buckit. Because it seems that this man needs one. Rentaro's final fear is someone that can kill him without him even noticing it. That's problably his biggest fear, getting destroyed instantly. Other than that he's not a very scared person.

History:
The story of a man who is covered in blood.
Chapter 1 There's a new sheriff in town

It was the first of January. Only the most scumbag of baby's would be born on the very first day of a new year. This could also be taken into another perspective though. Only very special baby's get born on that day. But honestly there's a little bit of both going on here, but we'll get to that. A new baby has been born. His name is Rentaro. His last name is Nara. Yeah this new kid has been born into Konohagakure and into the Nara clan. Great things were possible for this young boy. Rentaro's birth was not easy. He was nearly dead when he was born. But luckily the docters were able to save him. Later on, this turned out to be a big mistake. But again that's for later into this great tale. Rentaro grew up with his loving family. His mother, his other mother and his father. Yeah their family was pretty weird. But it didn't affect Rentaro that much. He called the mom that gave birth to him, Hank. He liked the name Hank. His mother thought it was a funny nickname so she just went along with it. The other mom who didn't give birth to Rentaro he called Shank. It were stupid nicknames, but Rentaro was pretty young at the time so he couldn't help it.

Rentaro was living a pretty normal life till he got into the academy. His parents were really harsh in training. They needed him to be the succesor for the Nara clan techniques. Rentaro is a pretty lazy guy by nature so he wasn't really into all of it. But he got the jutsu's down eventually. He learned the clan's kekkai genkai jutsu when he was nearly a Genin.

Chapter 2 Blood blood and more blood

As Rentaro learned the clan's kekkai genkai jutsu, something changed within him. He felt the desire to control people. He wanted to make them do his bidding. He had no idea where these sudden urges came from, all he wanted to do was obey them. Rentaro practices on animals first. He didn't really care about animals whatsoever so he thought it was okay. He controlled a few cats first and made them drown. It made Rentaro laugh. He didn't know why he was so happy about other creatures dying but something in him was just so happy about it. Rentaro needed a living human being to be his next test. He wanted to see if he could kill a living being with his jutsu.

Rentaro walked inside and called out to his second mom Shank! Shank! He called. His second mom Shank reacted to him with a happy face What is it sweety? Rentaro used his jutsu as she came into the room. Shank got caught and had to obey all of Rentaro's moves. Rentaro walked outside in a straight pattern as his mother shank obeyed his every move. She was screaming and yelling to Rentaro to stop it. Rentaro was in a trance of sorts. He wasn't going to stop. He had to continue this experiment and see what he could do. He had dug a big hole. He moved in a way to make his mom fall into the hole. Shank followed Rentaro's footsteps and ended up in the hole. Due to this the jutsu was broken but it was already too late. She couldn't get out of that hole. Rentaro closed the hole while hearing his mother scream. All of Rentaro's sense dissapeared. He just closed the hole. He waited near the closed hole as the screaming became quiet. Rentaro laughed with an empty look in his eyes. He walked up to his room and pretended like nothing had happened.

Chapter 3. Da man with da plan

The incident of the woman who dissapeared spread like wildfire. After a while the ANBU found her burried in the backyard. All traces led to the Nara clan's Kekkai Genkai being used. For some reason they didn't even care if Rentaro was the one who did it. They thought an almost Genin could never pull of something that gore. Rentaro's parent's got charged with murder and were brought before the Hokage. Rentaro slipped inside to watch what would happen. His parents received a grave punishment for this. Rentaro's mother was executed on the spot. Apparently it would be best if Rentaro's dad would feel the same pain as the woman did who died, and apparently that was best done by killing his other wife. Rentaro was questioning the logic behind all of this while his mother got killed. It didn't touch him in the slightest. He had no idea when he became so coldblooded. But he really didn't care anymore.

His dad was crying in pain and was then send off to jail. He was cast as a murderer and was condemned into the deepest corners of Konohagakure. Rentaro was assigned to a random family. He didn't care about it whatsoever. He went back to school as usual.

Chapter 4. B-Rank

Rentaro He wasn't touched by any of the events. He actually felt thirsty. He had this thirst for something but couldn't make out what it was. Since he was younger he always loved fruit. It was juicy and delicious. But it just wasn't enough. His new home was just a normal dad and mom. They weren't ninja or anything of the sort. Rentaro was working out a plan. His eyes turned red again as he was brewing up his plan. Rentaro had gotten B-rank at the time. He was a quite succesfull shinobi but it wasn't enough for him.

Rentaro finished his plan a day later. He didn't want to do anything flashy, but he didn't want to make it too little either. He took a knife from the kitchen drawer and stabbed his 3rd mother. He felt like doing this. Blood splatted over Rentaro's face. It made him very happy. It clenched his thirst for the first time. As he had the blood all over him, he used his kekkai genkai jutsu to make his dad stab himself with a pencil. Rentaro thought it was pretty funny. He was quite happy about what he had done, as messed up as that is. Rentaro afterwards made up his mind. He left the village. He wanted to see how many people he could murder. He was ready to become the world's best killer and one day meet the man called Death.
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RP Sample: Rentaro woke up pretty early today. He was paranoid about something. He felt like someone was watching him. He was currently in a cave. It wasn't very dark in the cave because it was already pretty late in the afternoon. Rentaro used his master sensory in order to scout out if there were any potential deaths around. He couldn't really find any so he went back to what he usually does in the morning. Eating fruit. The only thing that can satisfy his hunger for blood when there's no blood available, is some fruit. Apples, Bananas all of the fruits. He likes them all, he can eat them all.

Rentaro was pretty bored. But realised something. He had never fully explored this cave. He was too tired after yesterday's killing spree to even think about checking for stuff in the cave. He decided to walk in deeper. He found some rocks that looked like tits. He didn't really know what they were called again. He chuckled and moved on. Rentaro's humor is pretty dumb. As he moved on he saw a giant bird sitting on a few eggs. The instant thought that would come to someone like Rentaro was. Hmm.. Blood Normal people would walk away from something like that, even the weird people would only want to eat it. But Rentaro was out for blood. His bloodthirst could be felt throughout the entire cave. His eyes became red as he dashed forward and snapped the birds neck. It didn't know what came over him. He tasted the blood and was disgusted. Human blood is more much refined than birds afterall.

Once Rentaro was done he didn't really care about going out of the cave anymore for a while. He just dropped on the floor. He felt like sleeping. Sleeping was his love. He took a nap and realised that when he woke up it was already late at night. It was a perfect time to go out to hunt he thought. He stepped out of the cave and was ready to attack. A lovely little village was out in the far north. He could feel it. He took a big step and dashed. He ran with his bloodthirst flowing from him. He could sense plenty of people for him to murder. It was a lovely little night for Rentaro. He was ready to make a move.

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PostSubject: Re: Nara Rentaro    Sun Aug 10, 2014 2:43 pm


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PostSubject: Re: Nara Rentaro    Mon Aug 11, 2014 11:50 am

Change to D Rank please.

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PostSubject: Re: Nara Rentaro    Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:02 pm

Changed it, hope your satisfied.

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PostSubject: Re: Nara Rentaro    Mon Aug 11, 2014 12:31 pm

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