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PostSubject: Time for a little Rebellion   Mon Aug 25, 2014 10:03 pm

Name: Rebellion
Type: Sword
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 3
Affinities: Genjutsu
Description:
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Rebellion appears, at first glance, in the form of a standard claymore, though it is far from just that. It is a massive broadsword with a heavy double-edged blade, notched on both sides near the tip, with the pommel having several spikes. The grip is plain, but the guard is skeletal, with a skull-design on each side leading to the rib cage from which the blade emerges; on one side of the blade, the skull is that of a human, while the other uses a horned demon's skull.
Enhancements: While it is a fine example of a sword crafted beyond perfection, the Rebellion's true inner power lies in the fact that it can be used to activate Genjutsus through it, though only by the most talented and skilled of experts. By having the user transfer their own Chakra into it, the weapon's skulls' eyes will shine a bright red color, through which an Illusion that would normally require handseals will activate. Genjutsu techniques that require eye contact with the user can also alternatively be triggered by having the victim lock gazes with either of the skulls' eyes. However, the trick here is that the eyes can be manually brought to shine, without any Genjutsu technique actually being performed or taking effect, therefore making the victim or opponent constantly wonder whether or not they are under an Illusion.


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PostSubject: Re: Time for a little Rebellion   Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:15 pm

Ok, change 'Affinities' from nothing to Genjutsu.
S ranks get 3 upgrade slots, I believe.

Think that's all that needs to be changed.

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PostSubject: Re: Time for a little Rebellion   Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:26 pm

Le edit.

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PostSubject: Re: Time for a little Rebellion   Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:43 pm

Yasu wrote:
Name: Rebellion
Type: Sword
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 3
Affinities: Genjutsu
Description:
Spoiler:
 
Rebellion appears, at first glance, in the form of a standard claymore, though it is far from just that. It is a massive broadsword with a heavy double-edged blade, notched on both sides near the tip, with the pommel having several spikes. The grip is plain, but the guard is skeletal, with a skull-design on each side leading to the rib cage from which the blade emerges; on one side of the blade, the skull is that of a human, while the other uses a horned demon's skull.
Enhancements: While it is a fine example of a sword crafted beyond perfection, the Rebellion's true inner power lies in the fact that it can be used to activate Genjutsus through it, though only by the most talented and skilled of experts. By having the user transfer their own Chakra into it, the weapon's skulls' eyes will shine a bright red color, through which an Illusion that would normally require handseals will activate. Genjutsu techniques that require eye contact with the user can also alternatively be triggered by having the victim lock gazes with either of the skulls' eyes. However, the trick here is that the eyes can be manually brought to shine, without any Genjutsu technique actually being performed or taking effect, therefore making the victim or opponent constantly wonder whether or not they are under an Illusion.

Approved~ for 3000Ryo

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PostSubject: Re: Time for a little Rebellion   Sun Sep 07, 2014 6:26 pm

Ryo deducted. Enjoy.

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